Thursday 30 August 2018

Persuasive Writing

In writing we have been working on persuasive writing,  if we should have headphones or not. I choose why we don't need headphones. I believe that we don't need.


27.8.18


Why We Don’t Need Headphones

We are meant to go to school to learn, not to listen to our favourite tunes. I think that people spend too much time switching songs and watching the videos that go with the song. They get distracted and don't complete their work to a high expectation.

People also try to race to get the fancy headphones and people take the other persons ones and that starts an argument. When the teacher says "Shut your chromebooks", the teacher has to say "Headphones off" too.

When the teacher says an instruction children will not be able to hear.  For example when we do the instruction they will say "WHAT did you say?"  The teacher will have to repeat.

Conclusion:
Why, why, why, use headphones, its a waste of time and people do not get their work done. Even people sneak on youtube!!!

So no headphones no worries !!!!!!!

1 comment:

  1. You have made some good points Adam. It can be frustrating to ask people to take headphones off. Next time you could find some evidence to back up your reasons.

    ReplyDelete

Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.