Persuasive Writing

In writing we have been working on persuasive writing,  if we should have headphones or not. I choose why we don't need headphones. I believe that we don't need.


27.8.18


Why We Don’t Need Headphones

We are meant to go to school to learn, not to listen to our favourite tunes. I think that people spend too much time switching songs and watching the videos that go with the song. They get distracted and don't complete their work to a high expectation.

People also try to race to get the fancy headphones and people take the other persons ones and that starts an argument. When the teacher says "Shut your chromebooks", the teacher has to say "Headphones off" too.

When the teacher says an instruction children will not be able to hear.  For example when we do the instruction they will say "WHAT did you say?"  The teacher will have to repeat.

Conclusion:
Why, why, why, use headphones, its a waste of time and people do not get their work done. Even people sneak on youtube!!!

So no headphones no worries !!!!!!!

Reading actiavtes

Here is my activity for this week on the book we are reading called Refugee by Alan Gratz. This is my activity on the places where Mahmouds family have ventured through. I researched 5 facts on Greece &Hungry.

 

Reading activate

We have been reading a book called Refuge, I have done this activate. I drew the scene of Mahomoud and his mother at sea. Mahomoud is shining the in the dark while sea water spalshes in his face. The BOY is on the Left and MOTHER is RIGHT

READING ACTIVATE

In room six we have been reading a book called refuge by allen gratz, the book is about three families who are all refuges they stories take place in differant decades and the countries
Syria, Germany and Cuba. They have all had set backs in their journey.

In room six we have been working on descripeted writing here is my writing,I have made these sentences better

It is night time.

A boy walks on a road.

He sees a figure.

He feels happy.

THE CREEP ON THE ROAD !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It is a cold wintery night, the ground is all but frozen.
The grass is like green crystal.
All of a  sudden a cold current of wind blows in my face.

The wolves start to howl. 

I bolt, my shadow follows behind me, keen to leave the wolves.

“GO AWAY YOU CREEP” I yell, paranoid someone’s there.  

I scamper across the gravel road and see headlights.
I am so excited, my DAD!   
I run up to the ute, pleased to leave this place.

In room six we, have been reading a book called refuge we done an activate of a refuge camp here is my Creation on mincraft. Hope you enjoy

Art work

For topic room 6 has doing some art work. We typed our name on a document, printed it out, we ruled a couple of lines and we got a ruler,we colored in.
Here is my art work so far, I will do  another post when it is complete.I still have to colour in the circles.