Thursday 3 May 2018


In the holidays we had to write a sentence off your book my book where from carnage her is my sentence.Seal call
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  1. UnknownThursday, May 03, 2018

    Hi Adam, It's Miro. I like your descriptive sentence about the man because the sentence really tells me how he feels and so does the photo. Maybe you could make the page number a bit bigger. Is carnage the name of the book or something else? Also I realise that that sentence is incomplete and is more of a phrase.

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    1. UnknownTuesday, May 15, 2018

      Okay thank you for comment and advice,And as you can see i have made some chagnes than you again for the comment your sincerely ADAM

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