Thursday 12 April 2018

Writeing

In class we have been writing about the commonwealth games. Were learning to work successfully together. My buddy Liam and I did discriptive writing . Here is mine and Liam's writing on the rugby 7's. Next time we would like to make more changes as we go. Hope you enjoy.


Liam : Red    Adam : Yellow     http://www.scottishrugby.org/scotland-squads/scotland-sevens
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Scotland Vs Canada  
So welcome to the commonwealth games 2018. The crowd is pumped for this one, as Scotland face off against rivals, Canada. I’m excited for this clash tonight. The crowd starts apludding as Scotland and Canada walks onto the playing field. So out comes the Canadiens captain Nathan Hirayama followed by the Scotland captain, Harvey Elms.


Three Minutes till the games start… Here we go underway Scotland receive the kick-off.
Wide ball from Harvey Elms. Joseva Nayacavou catches the ball and dartes off towards the try line,He fends off Justin Douglas and the Big scotsman has crashed over in the corner, scoring the first try. Gavan low kicks the ball and it goes straight over the post getting the conversion. Scotland leads 7-0, what an exciting game this will turn out to be. 3 minutes gone Scotland lead 7~0.Lowe makes a breaks away he puts through a kick. Farndale who chasses and he dives over to score for Scotland 12~0 Kick to come. Bang bang their in again. 12-00, Last play the houdders gone  bradley passes to douglas he fends off lowe offloads to Pat Kay who scores for Canada.
12~7 This has been a good game so far.


13th minute:  Canada Kay passes to Morra dives over the tryline and he over he scored. From 12~00 to 12~12 Kick to come.Berna converts the shot 14~12 Scotland lead. The houdders sounds they have scored the match winner. Elmes scores in the corner 17~14.Fulltime up next on 7’s Tv it is New zealand vs Samoa from me Adam Price and, and Liam Irvine Goodbye by for now. Here is some of the best plays of day 1.


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