This week we have been busy writing our own diary, by imagining that we were a father,son or daughter of one off the 65 that tragically did in the Brunnerton mine here is my diary so far and I am just about finished. I was a son of one of the men that tragically died.
Hey There Adam Im a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School. Ive enjoyed reading your blog post. I loved how you added lots of detailed words.
ReplyDeleteNext time you could add speech marks so I know whos talking.
Add Conclusion to your ending of your diary writing.
Kind Regards Chloe